Nerdy Birds' Memo

Personally, I reviewed the memo made by the Nerdy Birds group.  I only had a chance to glance at the other pieces of their packet, so I'll just speak of the memo in this post.  One of the things I noticed in their memo, that was not included in ours, was an initial 'thank you' to the reader for reading the memo.  Another thing I noticed was that their were a few grammatical mistakes in the body.  With the memo being mostly used in professional situations, it seems best that they be proofread a couple times before being sent out.  I had one more point to make about their memo, but I don't have it in front of me at the moment and can't recall.